Wednesday, November 16, 2016

Story: Bugs Bunny and Laffy the Duck

Once upon a time and a forrest not far from Storybrook, there was a bunny names bugs and a duck named Laffy. The two grew up together and were inseparable. One day, they decided to take a journey together to the other side of the forrest. Bugs built a beautiful red carriage that hooked to the mice that Laffy found to pull the carriage.

During their journey, Bugs and Laffy ran into their old friend Elmer Fudd.

"Where are you fellers headed?" asked Elmer.

"We're headed to the other side of the forrest in exploration of the beyond," replied Bugs.

"Would you happen to have some room for me, too," asked Elmer.

Bugs and Laffy agreed to have him and continued their way to the other side of their forrest. As they made their way through the forrest, they also picked up a cat, a crow, an egg, and a millstone. The carriage being pulled became awfully heavy with everyone in it. But the mice decided that they would keep on with the journey in order to make it to the other side of the forrest.

After some miles, the mice grew extremely weak and needed to rest for the night.

"Just up here is Herr Korbes home, we came rest there," said Bugs.

When they reached the house, Herr Korbes was not home. So each of them found their own resting place within Herr Korbes home. The cat rested in the warm ashes of the fireplace. The grow perched above the kitchen cabinets. Bug fluffed his tail and curled up on the doormat. Laffy found a large bucket of water to crawl into to rest. The egg rolled her way around until she found a towel on the floor, where she rolled herself up to stay warm. And finally, the millstone laid down above the door and Bugs. They each fell asleep peacefully and soundly.

The next morning, Herr Korbes came bursting through the door. Bug yelled as Herr stepped on his tail, which caused the millstone to slam down on his foot. In a fit of pain, he ran to the cabinets to fetch his splint. The crow was started by the slamming of the cabinets and began to fly around the house cawing and clawing at Herr. infuriated, he ran to the living room and reached for the the pitchfork by the fireplace. Startled, the cat hissed and threw ashes into Herr's face. Blinded by the ashes, Herr ran to bathroom and grabbed a towel to wipe his face. The egg rolled out, cracked, and glued Herr's eyes shut. As he ran to the pantry to fetch the pale of water, Laffy jumped, honked his nose, and bit down on Herr's nose. Without a care to give at this point, Herr grabbed the bucket and dumped it onto his face. He released a loud yell as the water hit his face and everyone ran out of the house and all in different directions.

It was a hard day for Herr Korbes.


Author's Note:
I stayed true to the original story, but changed some of the characters within it. I picked Bugs and Laffy because they are more modern characters from Loony Tunes, which would help connect readers to their personality types and spark their interest into the story. I kept the egg, the cat, and the millstone from the original story and their role in the house. There was a duck in the story, so i just named his Laffy to add more of a tie in for readers an then I changed one of the characters from a pin to Bugs Bunny, because he is the counterbalance to Laffy. 




Tuesday, November 15, 2016

Reading Notes: Part B Brothers Grimm (Ashliman)



The Fox and The Cat
- this found be an easy story to retell, just adjust the dialogue a bit and explain the scenery and the characters more
vulpes et feles
Steinhowel's Aesop
LINK
The Little Lamb and the Little Fish
-  this would be a super interesting story to tell using a little more imagery and more depth. There isa link of a photo to be used. LINK

Simeli Mountain
- tell this story as two brothers separated at birth, and then how come up with a plot as to how the reconvene.

Lazy Heinz
-  tell this story from the angle of the sheep. Provide insight to the original story through the narrative of the sheep.

The Duration of Life
- adapt this story so that all the animals and men and women in the kingdom came forth in a line to receive their duration of life, but one man never went forth, turned into a sheep, and because afraid to tell God of what he had done. This will seem lengthy, but try to keep it short and concise.

Death's Messengers
- I feel like this would in a way relate to the previous story, but make the messengers a search party looking for the sheep

Eve's Unequal Children
- not a fan of this story at all. It just doesn't provide any depth of interest to rewrite.

The Gift's of the Little People
- This story is LONG with details. I wouldn't suggest trying to rewrite it.

The Hare and the Hedgehog
- another long story, but worth considering. You will need to cut down on the dialogue and be more concise in your paragraphs in order to keep it under a 1000 words, all while still providing a descriptive experience for the audience to connect.

Bibliography:
Dan Ashliman's translation of Grimm Brother's Children's and Household Tales (1998-2013)
LINK

Reading Notes: Part A Grimm Brothers (Ashliman)



Cat and Mouse Partnership
- could be told from the side of Tom and Jerry to make it more modern

The Wolf and the Seven Young Kids
- haven't read or heard any stories like this before, but it was interesting. Would need to cut down the length when writing it.

Little Red Cap
- would be something to rewrite, but would need to find an interesting twist or a better way to describe the story.

The Elves
- use this story but change the main character from a shoe maker to like, something that could possibly tie in with Pinocchio, and maybe how he became a real boy?

Herr Korbes
- change the characters to Bugs Bunny and Laffy and have them exchange dialogue
Illustration by Walter Crane
LINK
Rumpelstiltskin
- tell this story about a girl who invades cinderella ball and wishes to marry the king and how she is able to spin straw into gold and have rumplelstiltskin enter and teach her the ways and she live happily ever after... or would she? since she now owed Rumple a favor that will indent her forever.

Bibliography:
Dan Ashliman's translation of Grimm Brother's Children's and Household Tales (1998-2013)
LINK